Need a Better Hook

https://youtu.be/UarehVh9nqM

Hello Canvas Mates, 

I am so happy to be back in this class.  Since I finished the first segment, I have been teaching online at Grossmont and City, but I need to be more engaging and organize my canvas in a more inviting way.   My traditional class is very active and “butts out of the seat,” but I have been unable to translate my online class to reflect how excited I am to teach or how much I respect and admire my students.  I know i have too many points of entry, and it must surely frustrate my students.  I have attached a clip of my current/traditional English 202 class, and I will be gratefull for any and all comments